Thanks for noticing my lettering improvements. I've really been working on that. Also, the bird idea is good. I'll have to try that sometime in the not so distant future.
You can find everything you need to know about twinkies here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Twinkie
I'm actually more of a sno ball person myself: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sno_Balls
He, he ...Do you think the strip is not understandable because no one in Europe knows Twinkis and cheese whiz? Well but i can guess that these products have to be wonderful disgusting - linke some of our sweets for children (crackling bubble gum and so on...)
But tell us: what exactly are twinkis? I´ve heard it bevore in the TV soap Gilmore Girls that i like...
nice story (brand new I guess?). Is that a little autobiographical? I like the little details in your drawings, for instance the broken fence in the middle panel. An Idea were to put a little bird on the fence of the last two panels, that looks at Alp (panel 4) and Ferd (panel 5). Or use that idea for longer conversations... PS: The lettering is very good. It has always been good, but you've improved it with each of your comics.
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mightystumpi |
molesting the decapitated" is the only true thing to adhere.
the "devourment" album i mean
henleystudios |
Rikki |
thanks for information about twinkis!!
tpiro |
You can find everything you need to know about twinkies here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Twinkie
I'm actually more of a sno ball person myself: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sno_Balls
Rikki |
But tell us: what exactly are twinkis? I´ve heard it bevore in the TV soap Gilmore Girls that i like...
Ron |
Is that a little autobiographical?
I like the little details in your drawings, for instance the broken fence in the middle panel. An Idea were to put a little bird on the fence of the last two panels, that looks at Alp (panel 4) and Ferd (panel 5).
Or use that idea for longer conversations...
PS: The lettering is very good. It has always been good, but you've improved it with each of your comics.
Engelszorn |