very good :) I recognized the little mouse hole in the background: One suggestion: Why not put a mouse in there peeping out of her little hole in panel 1, looking interrested in panel 2, looking scared in panel 6 and running back in her hole in panel 7? PS: The stirring hand looks somehow strange, it seems to be his left hand with his thumb down. It looks circumstantially to stirr that way. PPS: Very nice that the spoon is drawn refracted in the glass.
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tpiro |
Wow, this community sure has grown since last time I posted! Before it would take a long time to get this many page views and votes.
Ron |
I recognized the little mouse hole in the background: One suggestion: Why not put a mouse in there peeping out of her little hole in panel 1, looking interrested in panel 2, looking scared in panel 6 and running back in her hole in panel 7?
PS: The stirring hand looks somehow strange, it seems to be his left hand with his thumb down. It looks circumstantially to stirr that way.
PPS: Very nice that the spoon is drawn refracted in the glass.
Rikki |
maca |