i like the basic idea behind this and the "dilbert" style (sorry for my "schubladendenken") is very good. i don't like how the dialogue ends. simms doesn't has to repeat, what every reader already has in mind. it's kinda killing the joke. "youre fired" could be a good pointe from the chef.
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cowtoon |
cSTRAUSS |
i don't like how the dialogue ends. simms doesn't has to repeat, what every reader already has in mind. it's kinda killing the joke. "youre fired" could be a good pointe from the chef.