Bunny & Cloud

1st short story (to be continued...) : I hope you Enjoy!

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Bunny & Cloud

Keywords (english)

and, bonnie, bunnies, bunny, clyde, lvoe, story

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carma

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2015-04-27

Published

2015-04-27

Artwork creation

2015-04-18

Language

Univeral

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Crime & Thriller

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Andreas | 2015-04-27 18:57

Great action scenes!

But the title and Wanted-Poster say: "Bunny & Cloud" and in the first panel it's "Bunny & Clyde"

Miezel | 2015-04-27 14:30

Inserire stufato carota con volpe

Miezel | 2015-04-26 16:44

Yaeh, così mi piace la fine

SeplundPetra | 2015-04-25 18:41

It is something strange again. The panels are to narrow. They must be wider. Es ist nicht gut skaliert. Das wirkt nicht. Ich muss erstmal einen Stern wieder abziehen, auch wenn die Story toll ist.

Sorry, aber die Aufteilung der einzelnen Bilder auf die Panels schränkt in meinen Augen die Lesefreudigkeit enorm ein.

miro2 | 2015-04-25 18:04

@SeplundPetra

There is nothing strange and nothing to critizise by me, myself and I.
I´m just happy that the story continues

SeplundPetra | 2015-04-24 19:09

Great! Really really great!

(only thing to critizise: the last panel on page 2 looks a little bit strange...).

miro2 | 2015-04-22 23:19

Cannot get enough of that stuff. This would be a book for me, made freely after the film plot. Definitely a book I would buy!
All those features, different angles and colours, mixed up in a nearly perfect way.
Grazie mille.