Thanks for your opinion on this. I realize the last line was pretty unoriginal; it's been done in many webcomics. But the point I was trying to make was does this line read any differently because the context is now different. The character is being self-referential, but now he's aware that he's being self-referential (breaking the 5th wall?). Maybe that point was lost or is just too pretentious to be read well. Oh well, at least this was definitely a fun experiment of a comic.
Oh, a philosophical comic strip. Nice idea with the fourth wall, but I think the final gag should be more weird like f.e. falling out of the panel, interacting with a closing comic book, ...
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