A Pirate's Tail

the captain is suppos to be a serious character, I'm going to change the way they talk, I was not thinking about that at the time I wrote it lol. the story is not a scary story its an adventure with some serious characters and some not so serious character, like Leon. the captain's "red head" is really a scar that is for an over all plot, this page is the start of a "filler" in a way, its part of it ut it sets its own plot and isn't playing a roll in the over all plot.

kusubi | 2009-07-07 21:45

"I laughed several times, especially when the captain describes the island. but i'm not sure if the comic is supposed to make people laugh?" für mich der kommentar des jahres!

gloiman | 2009-07-07 16:16

is the captain a serious character?

when the captain talks about the island, he uses very short simple sentences. the language doesnt seem to be like the way pirates talked hundreds of years ago ...

Made | 2009-07-07 13:52

Is this going to be an adventure story, a scary story or an action plot?

Right now it feels a bit scary for me. The capitain looks a bit creepy with his red head.

gloiman | 2009-07-06 22:23

I laughed several times, especially when the captain describes the island. but i'm not sure if the comic is supposed to make people laugh?

A Pirate's Tail

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