I admire how much you put into this comic. My longest comic has only 3 pages and I was already bored drawing the same characters and locations :) I think the story works fine: most of the pages have a nice joke, the end of the story refers to the beginning and it is beautifully drawn (f.e. a lot of detail in Alp's Lab - but the longer they stayed, the fewer details are seen ;)
I agree that the plot is slow sometimes, especially at the beginning. I wrote this when I first started this comic, and if I could go back I would change a lot of things. Growing pains, I guess. I have a more recent story about hot dog eating, and although the concept isn't as good, I think it is more concise.
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Ron |
I think the story works fine: most of the pages have a nice joke, the end of the story refers to the beginning and it is beautifully drawn (f.e. a lot of detail in Alp's Lab - but the longer they stayed, the fewer details are seen ;)
tpiro |
wolphee |
"Because we are already furry" LOL
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Volkertoons |