These are great, Si. Again, that distinctive style you have really works so well in these little vignette gags.
Only one minor issue I'd have - you should separate out the two pieces so that they are more distinctly not one continuous piece. It might be read by the unwary as if it's all one story, and that's potentially confusing.
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Only one minor issue I'd have - you should separate out the two pieces so that they are more distinctly not one continuous piece. It might be read by the unwary as if it's all one story, and that's potentially confusing.