The Thief of Talamdra

Hum ... Don't get me wrong, but this doesn't work well as a comic-book-cover. Seeing this, i feel no emotional connection to this project at all, only a distinct lack of interest ...

And this something an Cover-Illustration, even if it serves only as a Chapter-Cover, IMHO at least should try to achieve.

Since your drawing abilities have significantly improved over the last two years, you should give them more credit here.