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Mary Miller Inspector part 1
Mary is arranging an appointment for a visit to a member of the Association.
We call it SRF.
Mary was on tour before she finally arrived at her destination.
The people are very friendly and competent. Hansrüdi shows her around
. She also enjoys the company from Juroslav very much.
They show Mary the new Building, where she noticed that there is also a potoshooting ongoing next door.Hansrüdi promised her to take her there the next day. Next day she was there. On the following day, she went to the laboratory and saw that one of the tester got an assignment for the narcotics production department. She is interested and wants to observe the testing.
It is a pity that Juroslav is on sick leave.
The test was perfectly executed and everything was working.
Mary took one of the recipies and insisted on the cooking.
When it was done, she took a sample and fell. The probe container broke
and she got a dose from the product. Josef was also inflicted.
The firm immediately put out an alarm, also late because of the testing. Mary and Josef are under quarantine.
Juroslav is in the mountains on recreation we do not know if he ever comes back. A Tibetan monk is helping him to find his way.
The minor near miss incident was well handled and soon she is back to work
An invitation to supper she is not disinclined. Mary is congratulated about her good work and also is satisfied with the work here. She invites Hansrüdi for further Training to the foundation.
Arrived Hansrüdi is getting a sunburn while taking care of the garden. Later the switch on the TV. Germany just left the WM. The news Mary says that is just propaganda and is urging Hansrüdi to switch off the TV.
What happened to Josef, Mary is asking Hansrüdi?
Apparently in his local Pub. In the WM Fever.
Josef is wondering what Mary is doing with Hansrüdi.On an adventure trip to the redwood forest the hells angel took notice of them and are chasing them. Are they going to get away? This is another story.
How is the WM going to end?
We call it SRF.
Mary was on tour before she finally arrived at her destination.
The people are very friendly and competent. Hansrüdi shows her around
. She also enjoys the company from Juroslav very much.
They show Mary the new Building, where she noticed that there is also a potoshooting ongoing next door.Hansrüdi promised her to take her there the next day. Next day she was there. On the following day, she went to the laboratory and saw that one of the tester got an assignment for the narcotics production department. She is interested and wants to observe the testing.
It is a pity that Juroslav is on sick leave.
The test was perfectly executed and everything was working.
Mary took one of the recipies and insisted on the cooking.
When it was done, she took a sample and fell. The probe container broke
and she got a dose from the product. Josef was also inflicted.
The firm immediately put out an alarm, also late because of the testing. Mary and Josef are under quarantine.
Juroslav is in the mountains on recreation we do not know if he ever comes back. A Tibetan monk is helping him to find his way.
The minor near miss incident was well handled and soon she is back to work
An invitation to supper she is not disinclined. Mary is congratulated about her good work and also is satisfied with the work here. She invites Hansrüdi for further Training to the foundation.
Arrived Hansrüdi is getting a sunburn while taking care of the garden. Later the switch on the TV. Germany just left the WM. The news Mary says that is just propaganda and is urging Hansrüdi to switch off the TV.
What happened to Josef, Mary is asking Hansrüdi?
Apparently in his local Pub. In the WM Fever.
Josef is wondering what Mary is doing with Hansrüdi.On an adventure trip to the redwood forest the hells angel took notice of them and are chasing them. Are they going to get away? This is another story.
How is the WM going to end?
As Mary is on the run and Josef is on vacation nobody can tell the final wm Champion Story.
The visit of the alps is finished.
Appendix Mary Miller The quicky and the hells angel soon in this theater
The visit of the alps is finished.
Appendix Mary Miller The quicky and the hells angel soon in this theater
Kommentare
johann |
johann |
aber es besteht noch eine Chance wenn hansrüdi vielleicht wieder kommt, ein Bild geht mir da noch ab
deleted_177 |
johann |
Der Big Sur national state park mit den Mammutbäumen ist mir auch bekannt aus einer Jugendreise wie San Francisco.Na ja, und die Einflüsse der Schweiz, wenn ich mal da bin.
Anbei wollte ich Charaktere in Erscheinung bringen die dann die verschiedensten Sachen erleben. (Mary,Josef)In Arbeitswelt oder sontwie, wie im tatsächlichen Leben. Manch Fetisch mag im Komik ausgelebt werden.
Die WM hat sich natürlich angeboten einfliessen zu lassen als Zeitgeschehen im Comic.
Eigentlich könnte ich jetzt die Geschichte enden der Weltmeiter fehlt noch aber die Queen hat schon okay gesagt. Was meinste?
deleted_177 |
Das sticht auf alle Fälle heraus!
gelöscht |
Also mit dem Überarbeiten ist das so eine Sache. Ich selbst wüsste jetzt nicht, was man noch am Ablauf ändern sollte. Hatte ja etwas weiter unten schon geschrieben, dass ich dieses schrillbunt-Experimentelle eher von Filmen gewohnt bin. Und da bin ich immer froh, dass sie sind, wie sie sind -und nicht jemand daran herumgedoktert hat, um sie besser in gewohnte narrative Strukturen reinzuquetschen. Ich finde, Du solltest nur so lange daran arbeiten, bis es für Dich stimmig ist. Und dann sagen, zack!, fertig!, hier habt ihr's!
johann |
gelöscht |
johann |
es flüssiger zu machen.- aber mit Rat und Tat werde ich das anpassen
gelöscht |
Bemerkenswert wieder die Eigenart
johann |
gelöscht |
Im Normalfall wären die oben genannten Punkte keine guten Zutaten für einen Comic. Ich muss aber sagen, dass ich das trotzdem ganz geil fand. Ich hab' schon Filme gesehen, die ganz ähnlich funktionieren wie Dein Werk hier; teilweise sind sie auch ganz oben in meiner Favoritenliste.
Ich muss mir das ganze Ding noch einmal mit etwas Abstand angucken. Bis dahin verbleibe ich mit 5 Sternen und einem leichten Schwindelgefühl in Kopf und Magen.
johann |