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[...]es war mal wieder einer dieser tage an denen man am liebsten im boden versinken würde...
freya und elda waren unterwegs im park; eine art date mit schönem spaziergang. wär hätte denn vermuten können dass an einem solch perfekten tag alles schieflaufen könnte???
dabei begann alles so normal:
elda traf sich gen mittag mit freya im nationalpark. das käferturnier war gerade beendet und es war schön ruhig dort. sie schritten also an dem schönen pfad entlang, als grenouille sie bemerkte, denn dieser döste gerade auf einem baum. elda fiel ihm natürlich sofort auf und so kraxelte das zobiris wie betört vom geruch nach unten und schlich den beiden hinterher. niemand bemerkte ihn...so sollte es ja auch sein...
aber unglücklicherweise hatte grenouille heute mal pech; es störte ihn nichteinmal dass freya da war; diese schien in einer anderen welt zu sein mit ihren gedanken. allerdings nicht bei elda; freya hatte diesen morgen nichts gegessen, und so knurrte plötzlich ihr magen. elda bemerkte dies, fragte höflich, ob sie was essen gehen sollten; und da geschah es:
just in dem moment als grenouille gerade an eldas rücken springen wollte schnappte freyas zweites maul - die wunderhübsche pflanze da am hinterkopf ;P - zu.
dem armen tollpatsch blieb nicht einmal zeit sich zu erschrecken, zu groß war der plötzliche schock.
und da standen sie nun; elda, schockiert zu freya blickend; freya, der dies äußerst peinlich war und schließlich der junge grenouille, dem erneut das herz gebrochen war.
das finish erreichte die situation, als aus dem maul der pflanze ein wohlwollendes rülpsen erklang.
wenigstens gab es spätestens hier was zu lachen, und so endete der tag - zumindest für die weiblichen pokemon - doch noch in einem happy end[...]
spontanszene, wobei eine ähnliche skizze mal in der schule auf papier entstand.
bin ganz zufrieden damit...auch wenn der arme grenouille mir leidtut
schönen muttertag euch allen :P
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