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Ernesto -
Postman - Operation Donnerschalg (2 von 2)
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(created: 17.02.2009, uploaded: 17.02.09 19:41)
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| boy (toonsUp team) - 12.03.09 11:40
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Total nett (Ich war auch mal Jahrelang Briefträger und kann das gut nachvollziehen)
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| Knitt - 23.02.09 16:38
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Du hättest auch einen Hund schiessen lassen können
Trotzdem super
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| toonsUp Member - 18.02.09 09:02
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Joa...aber das letzte Panel ist schon OK, löst die Geschichte gut auf, ist jetzt kein Brüller aber auch alles andere als ein Fremdkörper. Bis auf die Richtungen wie der Keller schon so treffend angemerkt hat find ich es sehr schön erzählt und die Grundidee ist superb.
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| Ernesto - 17.02.09 20:58
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Danke! Ich gebe es zu - es GIBT KEINEN Schlußgag. Mir ist keiner eingefallen.
Das mit den Richtungen stimmt - ein verflixtes Problem Wahrscheinlich eine posttraumatische Störung
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| Keller - 17.02.09 20:47
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Da fällt noch was im Nachhinein auf: Es wäre vielleicht eine gute Idee, die Position von dem Stalingradkerl festzulegen, nämlich immer rechts vom Panel. Man checkt nicht, von wo der jetzt eigentlich schießt, und ob der Postman hin oder wegrennt. Soll heißen: Schüsse besser von rechts, Bewegungsrichtung nach rechts, außer im letzten Bild, da geht der Postman ja wieder zurück, als müsste er nach links gucken.
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| Trumix - 17.02.09 20:44
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Post mortem!! Haha! Actionreich gezeichnet. Schlusstext etwas gequält. Trotzdem 5 blaue Bohnen ...
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| Keller - 17.02.09 20:17
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Oha, saugechillt! Ich frohlocke sehr darüber, dass es dir getaugt hat.
Die Idee mit dem Stalingradveteranen rockt natürlich, ebenso der Superheldentitel "Postman". Wo die Flak ins Spiel kommt musste ich sehr lachen.
Bitte hauen Sie auch mit weiteren Folgen rein. Was sagen eigentlich die Kollegen dazu? Die müssen doch quasi ausflippen.
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| cwtoons - 17.02.09 19:53
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Schöne Geschichte, prima gezeichnet. Den Schlusstext in der letzten Blase finde ich leicht schwächelnd. Trotzdem five points!
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