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Hallo !
Es freut einen sicherlich positive Bewertungen,
aber es ist die (ausgeschriebene) Kritik die einen weiter bringt.
Also haltet mit euerer Meinung nicht hintern Berg,
und wenn ihr was zusagen habt, sagt es bitte :-)
bitte, bitte, bitte....
Nicht so wie gestern - da habe ich eine eine "Null"-Bewertung kassiert - ohne zuwissen was da nicht gefallen hat, der Gag, die Zeichnung, der Stil, oder alles..., das bringt mir nix.
Und keine Bange - ich gebe keine Revanche Bewertungen - oder reisse jemanden den Kopf ab. ;-)
Grüße vom HaChri
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| HaChri - 13.08.10 18:55
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@Rob:
Das, es mit einer dünneren Feder zu probieren,wäre doch glatt einen Versuch mal wert.
Danke für Tipp.
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| Rob - 13.08.10 14:02
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Rein gagtechnisch hast du schon schöne Sachen auf Lager. Dein Strich ist aber, wie Trumix schon bemerkte, etwas zu kräftig. Einfach mal nen dünneren Fineliner probieren.
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| Leichnam - 13.08.10 09:02
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Stimmt, geht schon ne ganze Weile so, dass ein Nullbewerter rumschleicht. Vermutlich onanieren die dabei, wenn sie Nullen vergeben.
Ich find deine Sachen hier generell geschickt gezeichnet und meist auch verdammt witzig. Gute Colos hast du auch drauf, was will man mehr?
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| Trumix - 12.08.10 23:59
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YEP! Zu kräftig und die schwazen Striche, glaube ich ...
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| HaChri - 12.08.10 23:29
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@Trumix: Danke für den Kommentar -
Das mit Hintegrund weich auslaufen lassen, ist ein gute Idee - was stört an der Schrift ? Ich glaub ich hab sie wohl etwas zu bunt gemacht...?
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| Trumix - 12.08.10 23:00
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Das mit der Null-Bewertung darfst Du nicht so eng sehen. Hier geistert öfter mal ein Null-Bewerter durch die Reihen.
Ich finde die Idee und die Ausführung sehr gelungen. Was mich eher stört, ist die Schrift und der eckige Hintergrund. Ich würde den Hintergrund weich oder als Kreis auslaufen lassen...
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