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| psycholiki - 31.08.10 19:01
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ich kann mich noch gut an den Lachanfall erinnern, den der Cartoon bei mir ausgelöst hat...
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| Felicitas - 29.08.10 14:18
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Toller Cartoon! Die Schrift finde ich ok. Nur das "L" von Elke solltest du vielleicht naträglich überarbeiten weil es eher wie ein großes C wirkt. Ansonsten super!
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| HaChri - 27.08.10 10:32
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Ich habe mich sehr schwer damit getan - den Namen "Elke" zu entziffern... und es fehlt hier und da ein Kommer - wenn das Ausgebügelt wäre, könnte man den Gag schneller erfassen.
ansonsten: "hübsche Aussicht"
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| KrissFizz - 27.08.10 10:19
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@Leichnam: Das ist ein Basecap mit Propeller .. hatten Huey, Dewey und Louie (Tick, Trick und Track) früher auch.. so was wollte ich als Kind auch immer haben.
Die Zeichnung finde ich auch sehr gelungen und auf den Punkt gebracht.
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| Pauercomix - 27.08.10 10:09
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Vom Bildaufbau her gefällt mir der hier super gut! Sieht so richtig nach anspruchsvollem amerikanischem Zeitungscartoon aus (bis auf die Schrift vielleicht, die müsste dann stilgerecht Times New Roman mäßig sein ).
Der Gag mag nicht so absurd-irre sein, wie von einem Gary Larson gewohnt, aber die Zeichnung, wie gesagt, Hammer ey!
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| Leichnam - 27.08.10 09:08
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Wirklich schön, erinnert vom Gagtyp her ein wenig an Gary Larson.
Was ist das für ne Antenne aufm Kopp beim Sohn? Das verwirrt und lenkt vom Witz ab.
(Zwei fehlende Kommas im Untertext, hier mehr Sorgfalt!)
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